Do you like this excerpt of my story?

Hey! This is the same story that I read just a few days ago! Really good, by the way. This is the one that you chose me as best answer for! I recognized it as soon as I saw the name Andrew and two words, ""the crew." I had hoped that you would repost some more chapters, and I am thrilled that you are still keeping up the hard work. It truly is good, and I notice that the parts that I suggested you change due to the possible offensiveness it could cause are changed, for the most. As I had said before, your story has a very good plot, and it draws the reader in. You distribute the perfect amount of "action words" (my term for a group of words that help describe an action scene) into the story. Your scene is full of action, as I just stated, you definitely know how to be descriptive. I really, truly, honestly think that it is good, and I am not just saying that for the 10 points. I honestly want to read more, and I hope you take my words into action and post more chapters, starting from chapter 1. I seriously state that I will be constantly checking your profile to see if you posted any more "questions" for this book! Good luck future writer!